Boooooooring
I don’t want to be mean, but this cover letter is SOOOOO boring! ResumeCoverLetterSamples.net created a sample cover letter for a Mortgage Attorney. Here’s the link:
http://www.resumecoverlettersamples.net/mortgage-attorney-cover-letter/
Whatever you do, do NOT use this cover letter. Its number one problem is that it is terribly boring. I’m writing a post about it, and I didn’t even read the entire thing. I couldn’t get through it. It was boring cliche after boring cliche. In fact, I’ll make you a promise. If you use this cover letter, you will NOT get the job. Guaranteed. I beg you, don’t make a cover letter like this.
We’ve been talking about the importance of the first sentence lately. Check out the first sentence they recommend: “I hereby present my resume for the post of mortgage attorney in your organization that could suit my educational qualifications, as well as experience in the relative field.” What the!? First off, I don’t get it. Second off, boring. Third off, I’m definitely not going to read the rest.
Your Name
Your Address
Your City, State, Zip Code
Your Phone #
Your Email
Date
Employer Name
Company
Address
City, State, Zip Code
Dear Mr. /Ms. Last Name,
I hereby present my resume for the post of mortgage attorney in your organization that could suit my educational qualifications, as well as experience in the relative field.
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